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Old 05-20-2006, 04:39 AM   #19
Diego Varen
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Good, a few mistakes. Bastilla is spelt Bastila. You spelt Tan in one area instead of Taz and the Ebon Hawk and the Exile are nouns so they must have capitals. Other than that it is good.
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