this thread really isn't necessary. if you want to post your thoughts on somebody's work, then do so in their thread. the only reason Machievelli gets to do so otherwise is because he was
forced at gunpoint
selected to serve as the StarWarsKnights.com Official FanFic Critic.
we appriciate your enthusiasm, but we don't need two official critics.
anyways, thread closed.
See the struggle of the faithless lot as they negate their time
How low to sink to the depths of their frame of mind