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Old 06-13-2006, 01:26 PM   #18
DarthAve
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..Thatr was pretty good. You had a nice use of details. However, maybe you should have split it into chapters. I hate reading uber long stories where there's no designated reading rest stop. I do love the fact that you have a character named Jazz, because that's my nickname.
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