well, JM, i thought it was only fair that i repay the favour you had done for me by replying to my fics, and here i am
i haven't read Heart of the Guardian because, well, it's already far into the story and my rear hurts if i sit and read for too long
so i thought i'd start with this. i just finished the first chapter and i can say without a doubt: meesa likey! there were'nt any errors that i could spot and you describe everything very well. keep it up!
i post more as i read through.