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Old 08-01-2006, 12:51 AM   #2
Jae Onasi
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I've always wondered about that conversation myself....interesting take on it, and I liked it.
The name of the drink as 'it's, uh, green' made me chuckle.
Only one thing really jumped out at me--you talked about the fireworks starting before sunset (usually they'll wait to shoot them off til well after sunset), and just a little later in the conversation, it's almost sunrise.
Karath telling Carth to say hi to Dustil from Uncle Saul was just wicked.

From MST3K's spoof of "Hercules Unchained"--heard as Roman medic soldiers carry off an unconscious Greek Hercules on a 1950's Army green canvas stretcher: "Hi, we're IX-I-I. Did somebody dial IX-I-I?"

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