Just one question Jae, will you post this in the Jedi Archives? It would be one of the best Fics to read there, without having to scroll down all the comments, etc. I could use a good read over this Summer Holiday (Which I'm in at the moment).
Edit: I think that you should do a Sequel to this with Jolee, Jae and Talin. Jolee could mention about how he met Mik'oth in a Chapter. Also, I hope your next Fic is written in this style. I think first-person suits you. If Jae and Talin have any kids, if it is a boy, they could name it after Jolee. Jolee Onasi. It has a nice ring to it.
Last edited by Pottsie; 08-02-2006 at 08:10 PM.