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Old 08-16-2006, 04:02 PM   #425
Rain128
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Jae Love the story, i have read it 3-4 times and it getts better every time

just a side note to point out tho... during the fight with miraxton Jolee throws a Green saber when his is purple (from the training sequinces in chapter 1 or 2) and i think the word shutta is more like the female dog veriant when poo doo is more along the lines of crap... for IE Bantha poo doo insted of bantha shutta....

but thats just me =)

love the story, eagrly looking forward to the next one
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