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Old 09-06-2006, 02:55 PM   #31
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Good chapter, but there were a little more grammar mistakes than I would expect. The biggest one I noticed was:

Originally Posted by JediMaster12
Iíll take care first thing in the morning.
You left out ''...of it...''

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