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Old 09-25-2006, 04:07 PM   #63
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Nice. I like the HK action and his comments. The only thing I have to nag about is that I don't think HK-47 uses prefixes like ''Unnecessary Threat'', or ''Indignant Response'', but rather ''Threat'' and ''Clarification'', maybe even ''Suggestion''.

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