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Old 09-26-2006, 01:10 AM   #27
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By the way, I noticed a few words left out at the beginning of that section.

"Didnít like this when it happened on Coruscant. I like it even less today, he grumbled inwardly."

I'm really enjoying it, by the way. You seem to have a carefully thought through storyline you're following. That's one of my weaknesses, as you may have gathered by my 'author's note' at the beginning of chapter 5 of my 'Vessa' story. And as I indicated before, I'll definitely keep reading this if you keep writing.

Mom tells me I need brain food... but if writing ain't that, I don't know what is!

My work in progress:
Hidden Histories: The Galaxy Hacker

Have a read, give a review, yah?
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