By the way, I noticed a few words left out at the beginning of that section.
"Didnít like this when it happened on Coruscant. I like it even less today, he grumbled inwardly."
I'm really enjoying it, by the way. You seem to have a carefully thought through storyline you're following. That's one of my weaknesses, as you may have gathered by my 'author's note' at the beginning of chapter 5 of my 'Vessa' story. And as I indicated before, I'll definitely keep reading this if you keep writing.