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Old 09-30-2006, 05:15 PM   #5
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Um, yeah... I'm a little confused, actually.

First, you make it sound like the Republic trusts the Hunters. Then, the Senators won't speak because the Hunters were there... making sure the Republic wouldn't be deceived?

And then, it sounds like you're having Tepe speak directly to the Hunters... so they are there?

Yeah, sorry, this just doesn't make any sense to me at all!

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