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Old 11-22-2006, 02:36 AM   #21
Diego Varen
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Very very long Chapter, but it is a reasonable length (I copied and pasted it to Word and it was seven pages long). Well done Grivis, but as CSI says, split the dialogue out to make the older readers able to read it easier. Looking foward to more as always.
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