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Old 12-04-2006, 04:05 PM   #117
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Nooooo!!! It was really good until now. Don't tell me you're running out of ideas that you had to rewrite a part of Episode One for the fic. C'mon JM12, you know you can do better than this, story-wise (grammar-wise it's all good).

P.S. Hurry up and edit the Ep. One pieces out before anyone else sees it.

Edit: Ah, too late, Pottsie already saw it.
@Pottsie: It's not just that dialogue, most of the plot of this chapter is taken from Episode One, hence my disappointment.

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