Nooooo!!! It was really good until now. Don't tell me you're running out of ideas that you had to rewrite a part of Episode One for the fic. C'mon JM12, you know you can do better than this, story-wise (grammar-wise it's all good).
P.S. Hurry up and edit the Ep. One pieces out before anyone else sees it.
Edit: Ah, too late, Pottsie already saw it.
@Pottsie: It's not just that dialogue, most of the plot of this chapter is taken from Episode One, hence my disappointment.