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Old 12-04-2006, 11:02 PM   #27
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Onderon only has one city- that is, the capital, Iziz. So instead of Revan ordering the bombardment of a "small town outside the capital", i would recommend that her rather order the bombardment of "the outskirts of Iziz" or something like that


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