Originally Posted by CSI: Nihilus
It's a good piece, as it describes before and after the meeting of the Exile and Carth. Nicely done...And Evan got the point, the shortie looks like rushed. Don't rush and take your time.
[Offtopic]God, I need to work on my fic...
I have to agree with both of those points CSI. I will edit the Fic, once I have time. I've asked Jae to change the Thread title to The Sera Tana Saga, since I want all the Fics to be in this Thread.