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Old 01-28-2007, 02:31 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Jason Skywalker
Not bad, but maybe you could have gotten deeper on Quinlan's turn.
Yeah, I don't think a Jedi that has been fighting against Sith their whole lives is just going to turn as fast as that, just because a meer vision. Overall the fiction is okay, keep it coming.

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