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Old 01-28-2007, 01:57 PM   #4
Diego Varen
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Originally Posted by Jason Skywalker
Not bad, but maybe you could have gotten deeper on Quinlan's turn.
Agreed. It seemed short too and I would've thought a Jedi Master wouldn't fell to the dark side that quickly. Not bad, but you've done better Fics in the past.
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