Since I don't feel like logging into FF.net I'll just post my review here.
Funny. Yes, funny. Most Psychonauts fanfiction tries to achieve this humour that comes out looking like the guy with the lamp shade over his head. You'll laugh a few times but more out of sympathy than actual humour.
It's deliciously original too and suprise suprise, it fits in with the Psychonauts universe. I can actually see this happening without any suspension of belief.
True, I've only read the first chapter...
UPDATE: Second chapter....
Delicious, their conversation is absolutely delicious. Your style is absolutely delicious. Just one itsy bitsy complaint.
Milla did see Sasha's eyes. Check the memory vault, we all see his eyes...
Unless I'm mistaken. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Last edited by Klia; 02-21-2007 at 06:40 PM.