No comment, huh? This either means that the story is really good, or really bad. I only wish I knew which of these is the case, since there obviously are some people that took the time to read this.
Seriously, if this story interests you enough to read it, please leave some kind of comment, tell me clearly if you like it or not (and if you can, what was it that you did/didn't like). If for no other reason, then so I can at least clearly know if the story is worth continuing. Silence is so confusing to me.
Anyway, here's a new part of the story, posted with hope that someone will say something about it.