Originally Posted by jediserenity82
Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that you weren't too pleased with the ending. I had originally intended to make it a two parter, which would have explained why they didn't let their daughter speak to Revan, but it was one of the last fics I wrote before the nasty writer's block hit me. Regardless, thanks for taking the time to read it, and I'll keep your critique in mind in the event I do write again.
It's good to hear from someone over at KFM. The primary reason I was bothered by the ending is that I didn't meet by biological father until I was 30. I think of how much my life might have been different if there had been that contact growing up.
I hope you get past the writer's block. It was well worth the read, and I hope tp see more.