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Old 10-20-2007, 10:27 AM   #736
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Originally Posted by Phantom Knight
Sorry for not replying. Anyway, I apoligise for making this Fic suck, but hey, at least its better than AVP (However, the sequel looks awsome).

Anyway, to make up for my mistakes, I'll re-edit my last chapters so they can meet with everybody's standards. Happy?
Kid, I did not say it sucked. My biggest problem since I began writing myself (Years before you were born) is that I critique the story when I see movies and read books even today. My biggest pet peeve is the full auto blasting with anything capable of it just because it looks snazzy.

I was irritated with the original Alien until I found out that the Android Ash was the doctor, which explained why they didn't notice it.

As I said, it was the setting that spoiled the scene. Everything else was pretty good.

'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that?

From the one who brought you;
What we die for...
KOTOR excerpts
Star Wars: The Beginning
Star Wars: Republic Dawn
Return From Exile
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