Originally Posted by Phantom Knight
Sorry for not replying. Anyway, I apoligise for making this Fic suck, but hey, at least its better than AVP (However, the sequel looks awsome).
Anyway, to make up for my mistakes, I'll re-edit my last chapters so they can meet with everybody's standards. Happy?
Kid, I did not say it sucked. My biggest problem since I began writing myself (Years before you were born) is that I critique the story when I see movies and read books even today. My biggest pet peeve is the full auto blasting with anything capable of it just because it looks snazzy.
I was irritated with the original Alien until I found out that the Android Ash was the doctor, which explained why they didn't notice it.
As I said, it was the setting that spoiled the scene. Everything else was pretty good.