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Old 11-02-2007, 05:44 PM   #741
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Can I ask you to send me a note about your concerns with the ending? Not fair to say there are problems without saying what they are! *grin*
I'm very interested in the specifics. I think the intention does get lost because I strayed from the actual word-for-word of Atton's cut death scene. I've wondered whether or not I should edit it back to a direct transcription....

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