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Old 11-03-2007, 10:37 AM   #742
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Originally Posted by Uilleand
Can I ask you to send me a note about your concerns with the ending? Not fair to say there are problems without saying what they are! *grin*
I'm very interested in the specifics. I think the intention does get lost because I strayed from the actual word-for-word of Atton's cut death scene. I've wondered whether or not I should edit it back to a direct transcription....

As I have already told the author, since I had not seen the death scene before, I did not recognize it. To me is was as if Atton was blind drunk and just opening himself up to the emotions is what drove him down.

I have already apologized to her now I apologize to you all.

'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that?

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