Originally Posted by Uilleand
Can I ask you to send me a note about your concerns with the ending? Not fair to say there are problems without saying what they are! *grin*
I'm very interested in the specifics. I think the intention does get lost because I strayed from the actual word-for-word of Atton's cut death scene. I've wondered whether or not I should edit it back to a direct transcription....
As I have already told the author, since I had not seen the death scene before, I did not recognize it. To me is was as if Atton was blind drunk and just opening himself up to the emotions is what drove him down.
I have already apologized to her now I apologize to you all.