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Old 11-25-2007, 06:43 PM   #154
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"Confusion is fair," Jana answered shortly. She sighed. "To be honest, the things that have happened on the Echo these last two months are overwhelming... more than that. They're downright impossible."

She boarded the ship with Beryl at her side and Jana gestured across the cargo bay to where the wall now bulged in to accommodate Reibe's fighter. "Takes away a little cargo space," she observed, "but not that much seeing as how it's slanted in, rather than just chopping that whole side out..."

With a look of frustration mixed with concern, she turned back to Beryl. "I..." she began. But she couldn't get the words out to tell her friend that Reibe was here to train her in using the Force. She decided finally to conclude with, "I missed you, Beryl. It's so good to have you back..."

After a moment of silence, she added bluntly, "Something's different about you."

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