Originally Posted by machievelli
Coruscant Entertainment Center
Star Wars Legacy: In Her Eyes...
No specific time given: Sometimes you try to match the picture others have of you.
The basics are good, and the change of pace from massive desperate danger which is most of the SW fare to just a sylvan glade was refreshing. There were some word usage problems and cumbersome sentences, but nothing that a quick edit and polish will not cure.
One of the Picks for this week.
Thanks, machievelli. I'll try to find some time to find those few errors.