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Old 04-20-2008, 11:33 PM   #5
Bee Hoon
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Awwwww. Poor Jolee! It's a nice touch, how you managed to include the little things which make all of them happy (although Jolee's is not that little, imho). As Rev7 said, it's really cute how Revan tells cannocks that he tastes bad Zomg Bastila/Canderous! >.<

Good job!

The sun goes down and the sky reddens, pain grows sharp.
light dwindles. Then is evening
when jasmine flowers open, the deluded say.
But evening is the great brightening dawn
when crested cocks crow all through the tall city
and evening is the whole day
for those without their lovers

-Kuruntokai 234, translated by A.K. Ramanujan

[Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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