Originally Posted by Maxstate
Religious books, 2 millennia old, teaching ignorance are the world’s top sellers and universally accepted sources of morality and ethics, and knowledge. The same books that speak of genocide, murder, slavery... it would however be low of me to critically connect this to humanity’s behaviour. Books are books, humanity is humanity. Books, are as far as I know, still unable to commit nor chronicle genocide.
Ray might like this part, but I'm inclined to disagree with the point you're trying to make.
However, I think it's written very well, and reads easy.
The one sentence that I'm not crazy about is:
Still, for everything wrong with humanity, it has produced some magnificent pearls of its own.
But that's not a hard fix.
Anyway, hope to see part 2 in the near future.