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Old 07-11-2008, 01:02 AM   #841
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Originally Posted by Mr_BFA View Post
Thank you for the review Mach. I wasn't really sure about this one, just because I didn't think it had a really good flowing feeling to it. It's unusual, in my opinion, but even when I try to go back and edit it, there's not really much I can see. [I'm probably just not looking hard enough though..]
It happens. I had JM12 telling me one section needed editing and I read it seven or eight times before I found it.

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