Originally Posted by Mr_BFA
Thank you for the review Mach. I wasn't really sure about this one, just because I didn't think it had a really good flowing feeling to it. It's unusual, in my opinion, but even when I try to go back and edit it, there's not really much I can see. [I'm probably just not looking hard enough though..]
It happens. I had JM12 telling me one section needed editing and I read it seven or eight times before I found it.