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Old 07-18-2008, 07:31 PM   #848
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Revan411, my primary goal as the local critic is to make the writing better not only by example, but constructive criticism. I hate the 'rah rah' sort of comments, and both Darth333 (Who hired me as it were) told me to 'fix without damaging the ego. I posted those articles primarily because you can't write well about something you don't understand.

Aster, thanks for the listing. I used modern equivalents because it is what I know.

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