Thread: [Fic] Triumvirate Wars
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Old 07-31-2008, 09:02 AM   #22
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Once again great chapter, you might have wanted to put how they got into the second fortified sith base as I am curious about it, but not a biggie. Also a few minor spelling mistakes although that is to be expected. Overall awesome, looking forward to more.

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Kreia-"If by apart you mean broken, scattered, and in piecies then yes."
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