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Old 08-10-2008, 06:26 AM   #2
Rabish Bini
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It's a nice start, but it was a little short, try to make the chapters longer. There was nice detail in the fic, and I can't wait for more, I assume this is your first fic?
Anywho, good work, looking forward to more.

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