I like the creativity of the names you using...it shows how much work is put into it. Very descriptive...though a bit more in the battle would have been nice. Yeah it could have been longer, but I write short chapters myself.
Meh, I guess we both have to work on that.
I´ve been away as well, and it really slows things down, as far as working on a fic, doesn´t it? I will definitly keep my eye on this one.