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Old 08-15-2008, 06:54 PM   #8
Rev7
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I see some similarities to Star War: Episode III. I have to say that I like the detail a lot. I think that you are off to a wonderful start, and I know that you will improve and improve as the story goes on. I eagerly await chapter 3. Good job, and keep on writing!

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