Thread: [Fic] A Soul Adrift
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Old 09-15-2008, 06:51 AM   #17
The_Catto
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I was too entranced by reading it so I didn't pick up any mistakes, if there were any that is. Sorry.
Action and suspense. Sadness. Happiness.
This story is full of emotion and I am loving every single sentence of it.
Great work, Endo!

PS: I wonder why Uncle stunned. Is he getting her out of there, or turning her over to the Slavers to try and save himself?
Interesting indeed.
Oh well ... Guess I'll have to wait and see!

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