Thread: [Fic] A Soul Adrift
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Old 09-19-2008, 08:43 PM   #22
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Very unexpected ending, there, with her uncle shooting her. That was just cruel of him .

I loved the fight scenes, and the slow moving calmness between them. It created a sort of 'hopelessness' for Taisan’kye, I think, and that reflected in what I, as a reader, thought, also.

Great work, I can't wait for more.

ps. power to the twi'leks!


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