Thread: [Fic] Star Wars: Lost Heaven
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Old 09-22-2008, 01:19 PM   #7
DeadYorick
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Ooohh, what's with the holo cam??? Another question and another nice installment. It's beginning to be a good read, RD. I hope it continues on like that. [[What am I thinking? Of course it will!]

There was one thing I noticed however that I just did not understand whatsoever ... it was this:

"Manaan being a water world I because accustomed to it."

Lol. No idea what that is or what it is supposed to be!
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