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Old 09-26-2008, 04:05 PM   #890
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Insomnia
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Star Wars, no specific era given: Hunted by an enigmatic spectre, a man desperately tries to stay awake.

The story has a delicious shivery feel to it, making you wonder what will happen. The end is generic and expected.
Darn. I thought the ending had a nice twist back when I was writing it, but still I do appreciate an honest opinion. Thanks for the review, mach.

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