Originally Posted by machievelli
Star Wars, no specific era given: Hunted by an enigmatic spectre, a man desperately tries to stay awake.
The story has a delicious shivery feel to it, making you wonder what will happen. The end is generic and expected.
Darn. I thought the ending had a nice twist back when I was writing it, but still I do appreciate an honest opinion. Thanks for the review, mach.