Thread: [Fic] Legacy of the Jedi
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Old 10-09-2008, 04:21 AM   #2
Sabretooth
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A chirpy enough start. I like the writing, it's very smooth and flows naturally. The storyline, form what I've seen didn't impress me as much, as I don't see anything that I haven't seen before, but it's not bad!

In that one scene, Semala ignites the other end of her lightsaber, which surprises Javen. Seeing as they have fought dozens upon dozens of times, shouldn't Javen know if Semala has a double-ended lightsaber?

Other than that, I like the simplicity of the fic, so I'll say it's a good read alright.


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