Thread: [Fic] Prior to Exile
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Old 10-12-2008, 10:25 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Endorenna View Post
I like it!

One problem, if my memory serves me correctly. I thought Yusanis fought in the Mandalorian wars.
I was wondering if anyone would notice that little detail. I should have used another general's name for the second reference.

I would like to show in the first few chapters that Alexandra is already well-versed in military tactics and that Revan and Malak had used 'Ends justify the means' tactics even before they fought in the war. This will become more significant as Alexandra is pressured to act deceitfully, but fears inaction would be worse than misdirecting people to act for a greater end.

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