Thread: [Fic] Prior to Exile
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Old 10-12-2008, 11:11 PM   #12
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An excellent addition, DY!

I love where you have taken things with this chapter. Alek and Alexandra's coversation was quite intriguing and the battle tactics were well thought out. Reading through your "goals" for the chapter, I think you accomplished them well. Revan and Malak are using their reasoning already, and how jedi like Alex are being roped in without wholeheartedly agreeing. I like the strategy/reasoning theme of this. Very well done!

Minor issue with Yusanis, but I actually didn't catch it until Endorenna mentioned it.

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