Thread: [Fic] Legacy of the Jedi
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Old 10-15-2008, 08:37 PM   #30
Darth_Yuthura
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Nice... very nice. I am not one for stories that are completely original with no point of reference, but I rather like this one. Javen seems to have a defined personality that stands out from others, but is difficult to describe.

Javen, Leah, and Garzulan are a nice group to work off of because they are different, but can work together to take advantage of their strengths. I think you should have more friction among them to add more to the little conflicts.

I am looking forward to new chapters and wish you the best of luck while I get caught up.
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