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Old 10-30-2008, 11:49 PM   #4
The Rhythm Schism
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OK, I think I buggered up there at the end.

First of all, I didn't mean that anything happened before Revan and Carth woke up. They were both like ... sitting outside an apartment, passed out.
It'd been like, finding yourself sitting on someone else's front door-step with a mate after a big night out and having no idea how you got there. (Done it before )

And second, the purple Twiliek was supposed to be married to Carth, and Revan was just laughing at him and turning the words what Carth said, back at him.

I may have to fix that part up....

EDIT: Done and done.
Oh, and thanks for the compliments guys.
Glad you liked it.

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