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Old 11-01-2008, 03:16 AM   #910
Bee Hoon
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Originally Posted by Darth_Yuthura
Should I really not post something unless I intend to keep it EXACTLY as it is?
Whatever posted is the absolute final version and any amendments will result in immediate annihilation of your continent and everyone else on this world will be turned into socks Imho, it's more of wanting to present the best work possible. I find it tiresome to comb through grammar and point out every single mistake, which is why I try to smooth it out myself :P

The sun goes down and the sky reddens, pain grows sharp.
light dwindles. Then is evening
when jasmine flowers open, the deluded say.
But evening is the great brightening dawn
when crested cocks crow all through the tall city
and evening is the whole day
for those without their lovers

-Kuruntokai 234, translated by A.K. Ramanujan

[Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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