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Old 12-09-2008, 08:55 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by Mr_BFA
Oh and I was saying that after some of the things that he's done, Jonas is finding it hard to look at himself in a positive light. Not being able to look himself int he eye and reassure himself that everything is OK.
Yep, I got that. It's just that the particular turn of phrase made me imagine his eyeballs straining to look at each other I suggest fiddling with it a bit, probably with some allusion to mirrors. Or however else he has to face himself and see what he has become!



The sun goes down and the sky reddens, pain grows sharp.
light dwindles. Then is evening
when jasmine flowers open, the deluded say.
But evening is the great brightening dawn
when crested cocks crow all through the tall city
and evening is the whole day
for those without their lovers

-Kuruntokai 234, translated by A.K. Ramanujan

[Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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