Excellent work, Mr. BFA
The first work was very good, very excellent, very emotional
Very good in my opinion, I listend to sad music with both...you definately mastered the emotional ability in these poems. The Second work's 'story' sort've caught me as the character in the story was wandering and wondering what was the truth, partially hoping not to find it, possibly in fear. It was indeed emotional and touching, and in a way, quite sad. Excellent work, Mr. BFA! Post more poems!!!!!