Thread: [Fic] Good Hero/Bad Hero
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Old 01-24-2009, 10:12 AM   #7
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I really enjoyed this, although I must admit that Til is way too verbose and easily sidetracked for someone who is supposed to be telling a story verbally;p The last segment was what made this fic stand out, at least in my eyes. Great work!



The sun goes down and the sky reddens, pain grows sharp.
light dwindles. Then is evening
when jasmine flowers open, the deluded say.
But evening is the great brightening dawn
when crested cocks crow all through the tall city
and evening is the whole day
for those without their lovers

-Kuruntokai 234, translated by A.K. Ramanujan

[Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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