Thread: [Fic] The Devil Within
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Old 01-27-2009, 09:51 AM   #27
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Thanks CQ, and HoP. Thats means a WHOLE lot. Really

Anyways. I want to see what you all think of this before I put it into a finished thread.
What should be different, is there anything I need to elaborate on? Is there not enough detail? Structure? What?

I really like this story and want to be the best it can be before I re-post. Any help would be GREATLY appreciated

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