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Old 02-04-2009, 10:17 PM   #2
Rev7
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Great chapter. I like the progression, but there is one thing.

Mira doesn't sound like....Mira in the dilogue (I always spell this word wrong :/)

Lookin' forward to more!

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