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Old 02-05-2009, 01:05 AM   #88
The_Catto
The Rhythm Schism
 
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: New South Wales, Australia.
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@Bini:Lol, I don't have that much time, I just like to quickly write this and that down whenever I can. Glad you liked it, and yeah, I like some of Opeths material as well.

Here's another that I wrote just last night.


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I tried to help,
why couldn't you see?
The screams and words you belt,
you forgot about the most important thing.

Our lives were intertwined ever since that day.
I just hoped and wished that I could find a way.
To help solve all of the problems, from all the letters we sealed,
but the deeper I reached, I realized,
that not all wounds can be healed.

Every wrong turn took you down a deeper hole.
Some nights you refused to come in and stayed outside in the cold.
I write this now, and I put everything I mean in bold,
hoping that you will take notice of these words pouring from my soul.

You, we, would stay out all night,
we'd have a good time, then come home and fight.
Everything we did to ourselves, we knew it wasn't right,
but we did it anyway, hoping to see the end in sight.

I choke on the fumes of my clean, yet abhorred life.
Sometimes I just want to get back the better days.
Strife, is a welcomed ingredient, but then I remember just how much it pays.
Pays to walk down the roads we've been;
to see the demon's we have seen.

I tried to help,
why couldn't you see?
The screams and words you belt,
you forgot about the most important thing.

That not all loves have to be unrequited,
to live life, is to care. And to die is to live.
Please, just remember all of our mistakes and forgive.
Forgive me.
That's all I ask.
Forgive me.
And I will not fail in this final task.

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