Thread: [NSW-Fic] The Squad
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Old 02-12-2009, 05:52 PM   #2
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Definitely sounds interesting, I had to read it twice to understand what it's about (as I'm actually preparing myself psychologically to hit the sack, so my concentration isn't at its finest).
The protagonist seems to have an interesting persona, on my first read I wasn't sure if he was just seeing things, or if they were real - when someone says that the 7:30 dragon was late as if it were a normal statement, you're not really sure what to think - but that just makes it more fun to read.

Anyway, I definitely think you should continue this, if you have a good idea how to do it.

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